Reading Matters

'Butterfly' by Sonya Hartnett

 

Fiction - paperback; Hamish Hamilton; 215 pages; 2009.

Sonya Hartnett is an Australian author who writes largely for the Young Adult audience. Butterfly, her latest novel, falls somewhere between two stools -- it feels like a teenage novel, filled with typical teenage angst, but it also deals with subjects, including extra-marital affairs, that are surely a little more adult. Given it has been longlisted for this year's Miles Franklin Award, I suspect the judges feel it's one of those crossover books that deserves some attention. I'm not sure I agree.

Without wishing to damn Butterfly with faint praise, this is a highly readable book and one that I hungrily devoured in a day. And while I very much enjoyed spending time with Plum, a lonely 13-year-old girl with body-image and self-esteem issues, there were elements of this story that irritated me.

For a start, we don't really get to know the full cast of characters that people this book. Plum has two 50-something parents, whom are mentioned only in passing, and even her brothers, Justin and the preposterously named Cydar, seem thinly veiled sketches. Indeed, it's not until you are almost a-third of the way through the book that you find out that Justin, whom Plum adores, is 24 years old, and Cydar, 22. This revelation came as somewhat of a shock, because I'd assumed both were teenagers.

Ditto for the time period in which the book is set. It's not until one of Plum's school friends mentions that her father has secured tickets to the Moscow Olympics that you realise it's 1980. Although I suspect I should have picked up on earlier clues, because Plum has a poster of David Bowie on her wall, wishes her bedroom was carpeted in white shag and hankers after a miniature television "set inside a sphere of chrome, with three stumpy legs and a rapier-like aerial". There's even a reference to a cricket match in which (Allan) Border is not out for 90, and Imran (Khan) is caught out by (Greg, or maybe Ian?) Chappell for nine. Where's Wisden when you need it, right?

The first chapter is also riddled with metaphors and similes, to the point of distraction. For instance, Plum's brother Justin is "as rangy as a tall ship, handsome as ship's portrait", Plum's cheeks "are the pasty yellow of cereal left to float all day in milk" and when Cydar teases her she feels like a "deer in a huntsmen's forest". Later she "pounds through the house like a rock down a cliffside, storming up the stairs like a centurion".

But if you can forgive the trying-too-hard prose there's quite an interesting story here, one in which Hartnett has perfectly nailed the pain and confusion of being a 13-year-old girl, desperate to be liked and respected. The mood swings, the temper tantrums and the tears are all here in full unadulterated shameless glory, as evidenced by this outburst at the dinner table:

"You always laugh at me! I'm a person, I have feelings, I'm not a joke! Why can't you all leave me alone?"

Her depiction of the petty bitchiness of school girls and the god-awful aspects of peer pressure are also superbly done. And while Plum is clearly not the angel she first appears to be, you can't help but empathise with her plight.

But the story just doesn't revolve around Plum. There's a second, interwoven narrative strand, in which Maureen Wilks, Plum's neighbour, plays a significant role. Maureen is a 36-year-old housewife, with a four-year-old son, who befriends Plum. As well as telling Plum things to boost her self-confidence ("You're exactly the type of girl who could become a fashion model" and "I'm so glad we're friends. I'll learn a lot from you"), she convinces Plum to reinvent herself by changing her name to Aria. What you don't realise is that Maureen has her own secret agenda. It is only when Plum figures out this agenda that the book comes to a head. But, even then, the conclusion feels somehow half-hearted, and not nearly as melodramatic as it could have been.

An interesting, entertaining book, but a Miles Franklin award winner? Probably not.

'Of A Boy' by Sonya Hartnett

 

Fiction - paperback; Penguin Australia; 204 pages; 2009.

It didn't take long for me to discover my first five-star novel for 2010, but with Sonya Hartnett's beautiful melancholy Of A Boy I struck unexpected gold. I cannot begin to describe how incredibly affecting I found this short novel to be. There's something about the slow pacing of this story that gets under the skin and leaves you thinking about it days afterwards. Indeed, it's been two weeks since I finished Of A Boy and I'm still wondering about nine-year-old Adrian and all that happened to him.

The book is set in 1977 and tells the story of Adrian McPhee, who's been abandoned by his parents and is now living with his grandmother and his drop-out uncle, Rory, in an undefined suburb in Australia. He is a shy, timid boy, frightened of almost everything, including "quicksand, tidal waves, fire, monsters, cupboards, being forgotten and going astray". The all-pervasive fear is not helped by the recent disappearance of three young children from a nearby neighbourhood (highly reminiscent of the real-life Beaumont case), which fills the news pages and has teachers and parents on edge.

When a strange new family moves in across the road, Adrian can't help wondering if the three children -- Nicole, Joely and Giles -- are the three children who went out for ice-cream and never came home. When he befriends them his small, closeted and lonely world begins to open up...

The real strength of this story, which is written in plain, languid prose, is Hartnett's uncanny ability to get inside the head of a lonely school boy. She underplays everything, so it is you the reader who comes to understand the pain of his existence. I found the following passage, towards the end of the book, particularly heart-breaking:

He wasn't a gregarious boy, he couldn't push his way into any existing group of friends; he felt that, having nothing to offer, they would recognise him as a parasite and treat him with contempt. The reason he felt he had nothing to offer was that, in his heart, he knew he was dull. Nothing about him gave him value: he was ordinary and dull. But at least he was smart enough to know it: he wouldn't become one of those wretches who lurk the perimeters, who live the hideous role of whipping-boy, lackey, buffoon. He exiled himself ruthlessly, which at least was dignified. He could not be injured if he shielded himself from harm.
But school is a terrible place for a rejected child. The ringing of the lunchtime bell was enough to cool his blood; the lunch hour seemed an endless desert of time. He didn't complain or resist going to school but every day he haunted the gates, hoping against hope that his mother would walk by, discover him, and carry him home.

He is a beautifully drawn character, as is his grandmother, the headstrong Beattie, who doesn't really want him but feels obliged to take over where her own daughter left off. She moans that he rules her days, that she hasn't the energy to look after him. "My mothering days are done," she claims.

"I can't go anywhere. I can't forget myself - I've got to be here every three-thirty, collecting him from school. I get a holiday only when he does. I've got to cook a decent meal for him every night, so he doesn't waste away. He needs cleaning, clothing, carting here and there. It's hard work, rearing a child. It's not work for the old."

Similarly, Uncle Rory is a brilliantly realistic character: a 25-year-old man living with the guilt of a horrendous car accident that left his best mate a vegetable. When most everyone else has written off Rory, it's clear that he has a lot to offer his young nephew. The scenes between the two of them are very touching.

I hesitate to draw comparisons with other novels, because this one is unique, but it did remind me very much of Randolph Stow's The Merry-go-round in the Sea, particularly in its depiction of childhood, albeit it in different parts of the country in different eras. But there's something about the melancholy of the stories that are achingly familiar.

Not surprisingly, Of A Boy has garnered awards and nominations aplenty. It won the 2003 The Age Book of the Year and the 2003 Commonwealth Writers Prize. It was shortlisted for the 2003 Miles Franklin Award, the 2003 New South Wales Premier's Literary Award and the 2003 Victorian Premier's Literary Award. It was longlisted for the 2003 Orange Prize for Fiction.

For British and American readers looking to secure a copy of Hartnett's novel, please be advised that it has been published under a completely different name: What the Birds See

You can read an extract here.